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and who needs you?
Your touchable face,
Yet untouchable heart.
A demon inside lurking for lust.
That's all that you need,
No strings attached.
But still I strive for your hazardous touch,
still wonder what determines your prey at night.
I wish you would deviate from your sinful act.

but who needs me?
So use to heart breaks
with tears and running make-up.
So innocent,
yet lenient for somebody not worthy.
All these feelings,
yet from you no mercy:
I'm still tortured.
Waiting, wishing,
decieving myself by saying
Maybe we'll get it right...
Opposites attract.
©2005-2009 ~missyssim
:iconmissyssim:

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Wow, I'm actually submitting a lot in one day. lol
I like this. That's why I even made a pretty picture to go along with it.

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:iconwilluholdme:
:) nicely written. :hug:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:icondkem:
Wow the more you submit the more i see suttle changes and these are the changes that show that you will go far from your set up and the emotion you infuse with every stanza i find myself being drawn in......keep it up

:hug:

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Did I Smile I must not have Smiled
:iconmissyssim:
=) I'm glad. :hug:
:thanks:

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~*:heart:*~
:iconmusicphreke:
i like the emotion and the idea behind it.
i think i get a little lost in it at points tho. it seems to flow well at the same time tho, so i dunno
maybe just me. not my favorite by you i guess but it's not bad by any means :)
l8er. keep up the writing. i enjoy them a lot!

mP

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musicphreke -- "LOVE the music; LIVE the music"
:iconwilluholdme:
:hug:

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I'm happier than I look. :heart:
:icongayahuaniel:
Well written, very well indeed. Improvement is noticable. Keep it up!!! :hug:

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Uuma quena en'mani lle ume (ri'mani lle umaya). (Uma ta ar'lava ta quena ten'irste'.)


Don't talk about what you have done (or what you are going to do). (Do it and let it speak for itself.)
:iconthe-newbie:
I like this.. I like it a lot.

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Your existence is pointless with out me.

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